this is awesome: I love the structure of the story, I love how nate might look like a twelve year old but is a badass never backing out from a confrontation. Never fucking giving up., how he slowly gets under brad's skin and the way you choose to tell us about it.. and I love brad unfucking the situation and getting THE smile in return..
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Date: 2010-05-02 08:25 pm (UTC)well done!